Friday, October 24, 2008

mARTin: kumm shirt

Okay, so this is my rough design for the new KUMM shirts. I would like as much feedback as possible, because at this point I dunno what to add/remove/change/if it's any good at all.

4 comments:

  1. Axe the first comma. It's grammatically wrong but would be annoying otherwise.

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  2. Axe the whole "In Morris Minnesota thing"... just "KUMM turns you on"

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  3. He's totally right.

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  4. Hi Martin!
    Technically, Morris, Minnesota would be correct (think of how you write out an address on a piece of mail). But I like the idea of leaving it out, since not everyone would get the "in Soviet Russia" joke anyways...

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